Author : michael Morpurgo
As a thomas peaceful looks back over his childhood from the battlefields of the 1 World War his memories are full of family life deep in the countryside but the clock is ticking and every moment tommo spends remembering how thing used to der means another moment closer to something which will change his life for ever
I think that you could add a bit more detail into your book review Cameron, and you could maybe sure that you add in punctuation.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Megan. You need to add more detail to this review to make it a level 4 piece of writing and you also need to add the correct punctuation when needed.
ReplyDelete