The masked pirate
There is a pirate named Sam he wants to work on a ship. He drives the boat into a wharf so the captain takes over the job. And there was pheef how wanted to stalls all the gold the tries to beat it under the sand the captain foley's the pheef and tackles him down to the ground the thief went to jail when he got out of jail he want to blow the ship up so he putTNTt in a bill and lit it Sam was working and he tip over the ball Sam told the captain the captain
I liked it when he cracht the bout.
by Russell Punter.
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ReplyDeleteI think just add more detail, back up your information, Re - read your book review so there are no spelling mistakes!
ReplyDeleteLachlan Doesn't make sense also you need to proof read and put the cover of the book in it as well.
ReplyDeleteGood review but you need to add what you like and disliked and a picture of the book also capitals at the start.
ReplyDeleteI think you could add a bit more detail and you need to remember to add in a picture
ReplyDeleteLachlan, what do you mean by pheef? To make your work better, add the book cover and re read your synopsis / add more info.
ReplyDeleteLachlan, what do you mean by pheef? To make your work better, add the book cover and re read your synopsis / add more info.
ReplyDeleteAdd a picture, more info, character detail, genre and like Tyrone what do you mean by pheef?
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